The Good Samaritan
I am lying on the ground feeling nothing but pain as I have been robbed. I can taste the red liquid blood in my mouth and feel blood dripping from my head and I am feeling woozy. I see a priest walk past as if I wasn't there. I try to say help but nothing comes out of my mouth. I am shivering with worn clothes and I look up to the sky and see the clouds. I see another man pass me not bothering to help me. I close my eyes and then I feel someone's warm hands on me. I open my eyes. It is a Samaritan. I think to myself what is he going to do, stab me until i’m dead? No, he gives me water and takes me away on his donkey.
by Caitlyn
by Caitlyn
To Caitlyn:
ReplyDeleteI love your moment in time of the Good Samaritan. Though I did spot mistakes. And these mistakes were things like punctuation (not adding commas, you put 2 full stops and more).
Keep Up The Good Work!
ReplyDeleteKeep Up The Good Work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Josephine and AJ
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