The Good Samaritan
The Good Samaritan
I am lying on the ground feeling nothing but pain as I have been robbed. I can taste the red liquid blood in my mouth and feel blood dripping from my head and I am feeling woozy. I see a priest walk past as if I wasn't there. I try to say help but nothing comes out of my mouth. I am shivering with worn clothes and I look up to the sky and see the clouds. I see another man pass me not bothering to help me. I close my eyes and then I feel someone's warm hands on me. I open my eyes. It is a Samaritan. I think to myself what is he going to do, stab me until i’m dead? No, he gives me water and takes me away on his donkey.
by Caitlyn
To Caitlyn:
ReplyDeleteI love your moment in time of the Good Samaritan. Though I did spot mistakes. And these mistakes were things like punctuation (not adding commas, you put 2 full stops and more).
Keep Up The Good Work!
ReplyDeleteKeep Up The Good Work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Josephine and AJ
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